November 4th, 2003

msauvage purple

Blarrrg

Still not doing so good. Collapse ) Didn't go to workshop tonight. Haven't emailed story to class yet--I have decided to just send them chapter 2 straight off, but there's a dialogue between Rose and West that just sincerely isn't working, because West lets slip way too much information, and it's completely out of character, and it needs to be more of a deadpan, "Maybe I'm telling the truth, maybe I'm not" kind of moment.

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