Cleolinda Jones (cleolinda) wrote,
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Womanly Words revision

All right. The original is this epic 2-3 page dictionary poem. I've drastically shortened it, although I'm still wondering if it's too long. Also, the beginning magically shifted into 5-line stanzas while I was revising; I don't know if that form breaking down works thematically, or it just... doesn't. Let me know what you think.

P.S. FP spacing is lame. You can adjust it by going to "text pref" in the upper righthand corner of the screen and screwing with the two options to the far right.
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